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Into The Raw


This is another challenge set forth by the great Chuck Wendig.

Once again, my gorgeous Melon goddess tore apart herself with me… the idea behind this prompt was so simple… but goodness me it was difficult.

Also once again… I have no idea what this is ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ it is obviously fictional and … fantasy… I dunno.

Hope you like it! Hope it makes you feel something (besides boredom) because isn’t that why we read? To escape. To feel the things?

Anyway. Go check out my fruity sister and her wonderful words.

I really don’t know what you want from me! Just because you yell doesn’t mean I can hear you better. Raise your voice all you want, I still can’t hear you.

Now, I have told you before… There is nothing wrong with me. I am completely normal. I won’t change myself for you.

These? My wings? Don’t go bringing them up again! Can we have just one disagreement with out you using my wings against me? If you don’t like them, there’s the door.

Oh, really… You are gonna compare me to her again? That angry, tinkling bitch has nothing on me!

That’s rich, coming from you. Don’t just show me anger and try to convince me you’re passionate! You wouldn’t know passion if…

Hold up… What are you doing with that match? Think about what you are doing… Don’t you light…

Extinguish that immediately!

Raw emotion? That’s all you want? I canngive it to you, just put the match down, baby, please… I love you. Please! Don’t! Please!


Where are you going? You can’t just leave me like this?




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