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Show me

I want to write more about love

But I realise I don’t know what love is

Is it that feeling you get in your belly

As if you are falling

Or flying


Is it like breathlessness


Is it like slow piano melodies

Building crescendos

Like finger tips,


And lips,


Is it like cool sheets on hot nights

Or fluffy downy feather quilts in the winter

Is it bad to say that I am scared to find out?

Is it like drowning?



Does it hurt?

I don’t think love is meant to hurt

I think love might be like chocolate.


I think love might be like music.


I think love might be like sleep.


I thought I knew once …

I thought I felt it.

Received it.


But I realise I don’t know what love is


…One day

I will find out.

One day…

Someone may show me.


38 thoughts on “Show me”

  1. Oh, there’s so many songs to your poem, Oh to be in love again, Definitely butterflies a plenty, scary, cool sheets and fluffy warm donna’s all at once, music with chocolates and cream to lick off, breathlessness and tingles all over as your mind drowns in dreams and wishes from nether nether land. Well I think that about covers it, and if you live through it without any pain or feeling hurt, you’ve done well. Cheers Dear.

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  2. Awww.. you will definitely find true love! It’s right around the corner. I don’t know which corner, but one of them. Bam! Love. lol
    They’ll love your writing, too! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. They? Goodness… I just want one… no orgies thanks. I am not that sorta girl…
      Thanks you, Wardy Muffins
      I plan on being hopeful for that one day… not today hahahaha
      I’m still in the “I’ll believe it when I see it,” frame of mind.
      For now, I will just enjoy digitally hanging out with my new friends ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜™

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      1. Maybe I’m just getting old… but who has the energy for an orgy?… I barely have enough energy to lift the energy drink to my lips… I’d rather take a nap… maybe that’s just me… I don’t know… naps are soooo good….

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      2. Naps are the best… naps are like treats for adults… it is like our “going to the park” lol
        The thought of an orgy is terrifying to me… I don’t think it is an age thing… unless you were really into orgies in your 20s or something lol otherwise I think it is just a “I’m happy with just one vagina to take care of, thanks” sort of thing… lol
        This went in a strange direction…
        You aren’t old!
        *she says having no idea of Layney Bear’s age

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      3. No, not more than one (at a time). I said ‘they’ in a singular way. I guess I could have said ‘he’.
        Be hopeful, but don’t look around for him. You’ll just run into him, and you’ll know.
        And when you do… wow…

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      4. Thanks, Wardy Muffins… I’ll put down the binoculars then? And the divining stick? And the metal detector? ๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿค˜ Jokes. I’m in absolutely no hurry ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
        Thank you…

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      5. I have actually thought about this sort of thing… and freaked myself out… like one day, I will meet someone and that will be the beginning of our story… but I won’t know that it is our story for ages… shit it is making me all panicky

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  3. This was… breathe sigh… lovely!

    You do know what love is… because you know the opposite of it and have described it very touchingly in this beautiful string of thoughts!

    I’m certain… the love of your life will encounter all the treasure that you are and the path of love yet to be discovered… together… the both of you!

    Man!! I can feel it! LemonLovely! You’re such a rock star! You’re gonna blow his socks off! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. Thank you so much…
      I have never experienced it…
      One day, my someone will come along… maybe. I am still skeptical. I am also skeptical of whether or not I will be able to do all the things lol
      You are such a sweetheart, sweet Melon.
      Thank you for giving me hope when I am in short supply.


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